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Brooklynn Cherry's avatar

very chilling; I see why this got published, excellent writing

caroline cherry's avatar

aww thank you so much! also, name twins! πŸ’

Brooklynn Cherry's avatar

twinnnnn πŸ’ 🫢🏾

lilly madison's avatar

oh my gosh its not often i actually get like HOOKED like this, but i was SAT, this is amazing caroline

caroline cherry's avatar

YAY thank you so much!!!

Haley 😬's avatar

One of your best fictional short stories! I can’t wait for more fiction pieces in the future!

caroline cherry's avatar

aww thank you so much!!

Emily S.'s avatar

So good!!

caroline cherry's avatar

thank youπŸ₯°

Aaron's avatar

Incredible

caroline cherry's avatar

thank you!!!

caroline cherry's avatar

i’m so grateful to you and bramble house for believing in this story!!!

krista lynn's avatar

woooooah, this is amazing!

caroline cherry's avatar

thank you so much!!! 🫢🏻

Catherine's avatar

This has the feel of a psychological thriller. Love it!

Brooke πŸͺ's avatar

Yessss one of my faves!!!

caroline cherry's avatar

yay thank you brooke! πŸ’•